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« on: December 17, 2007, 03:01:33 pm » |
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well if you look below you will see a preview (actually its the ful Ver.) of a new story so enjoy
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« Reply #1 on: January 10, 2008, 06:57:24 pm » |
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i saw her face.. it was a noticaeble thing to see and yet ive never saw it before the way it suddenly dawned on me it took me by suprise and i must admit i liked it. she was; like most people i had liked in the past a short blonde. but the thing that threw me off was that she had come after me! i mean i usually made the moves for a woman but she had come after me. i had never thought that she would come after me. i mean we hardley knew each other i kmew that her name was Anasofia and everyone called her ana. but as for a relansanship! i had no clue that this... this... Ana. was in as much love as she was! i mean now that i think about it the way she acted around me was; at most, sketchy but then and agian she showed none of the classic signs that someone like you . and i know you are proablly thinking ,"hey it was obvious from the start" well it was not! well here's the real story the story fo how i got my first
she had me since the third grade and of course at that time everyone thought that girls were icky (if you were a boy) and boys were dirty disgusting good-for-nothing-uptight-SOB-people. (of course only women would think of something so cruel) but anyway she has had this crush or so she says.. since i "rescued" her from an alligators jaws. well how did i do that? well at that time we were about three feet tall and she had made the mistake of playing too close to the lake. there a HUDGE alligator (it was about four feet; that was hudge for us at the time) had been closing in on her. so i jumped on it; still in the water, the gator forgot about her and dove down. i swam fo the shore and said are you Ok...... all pf the sudden the gator jeapt out f the water and grabbed me, i knew it was the end when i heard a gunshot, then the endless thrashing i had been experiencing ended and i was safe.... END CHAPTER ONE well this story is NOT true but its a work in progress so if you see it reply OK SD
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« Reply #2 on: February 05, 2008, 04:42:02 pm » |
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hold on hold on now we r not that cruel lol and yeah its pretty good so far but u need to have the aligater get distracted couse it wouldnt dive down 4 no reason i should know so yeah but keep up the good work sal
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« Reply #3 on: February 05, 2008, 07:31:21 pm » |
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hold on hold on now we r not that cruel lol and yeah its pretty good so far but u need to have the aligater get distracted couse it wouldnt dive down 4 no reason i should know so yeah but keep up the good work sal done!
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« Reply #4 on: November 08, 2008, 01:43:48 pm » |
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I see that several guests are online. Are any of you friends of Salvador?
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